I’ve just spent the best part of the day re-editing ‘The Deluge of Elias’ (the dystopian sci-fi short story in case you’re new here). During the conversion from straight .doc format to HTML I was able to pick up and correct a number of errors, and expand on some sections to give it more depth.
It’s been a while since I worked in pure HTML so it was quite enjoyable to ‘get my hands dirty’ again.
Some additions to the original version are an encoded version of the cover, a note from me and then an introduction to ease the reader in to the world of Elias. I did this as some readers felt the story was lacking some background information relating to The Dome. Although I had intended to convey one of the main themes of the story (the control of information) by alluding to a total black out of everything that precedes the present; it was obvious that it didn’t come across as clearly as I hoped.
As I intend to continue write about The Dome I have deliberately avoided giving any details about how it came about, so hopefully the information presented in the new introduction will plug some of the holes, but leave the reader still wanting more.
At the conclusion of the story I’ve also included a teaser to the next short story that I’ll be producing.
Sci-Fi short story ‘The Deluge of Elias’ is available now on Kindle: